Hey guys, this weekend I am going to be writing a full length story based on the story below. It is going to be around 35,000 words and I am interested in knowing whether you guys have any ideas to add to the story. At the bottom of this story is a survey where you can add your own ideas to my story and who knows, I might just include them. In fact if I do I will even send the completed work to those people whose ideas I use. This is what I have as ideas right now. 1) Extend the story below 2) Introduce Laura’s friend who secretly would love to be spanked 3) Have the girls spank each other 4) Mom’s birthday spanking 5) Both girls spanked together and 6) Brian gets to play Santa Claus.
Anyone care to add an idea? If you do just fill in the survey at the bottom and add extra characters to the story if you wish.
Birthday Spanking For Laura
They had been neighbors for nearly three years now, not long after her mom had packed up and moved away from her husband with her 15 year old daughter in tow. Brian Larson had welcomed them into the neighborhood like he would anybody and provided them with any support that he could. Brian wasnât an intrusive sort and really kept the relationship as a cordial one, always ready to help out when Rose Kelly needed some type of physical assistance around the house. For the most part that happened during the first few months and since that time he only helped roughly two or three times a year.
Part of his reluctance not to be intrusive was her teen daughter, Laura. She was a normal, bubbly kid, a typical girl next door, the type you wouldnât hesitate to hire as a babysitter, that would have been of course had he had any children. He knew it must have been difficult for the both of them so he tried to leave them alone as much as he could.
It was August and the teenager was just about to turn eighteen, he had been made aware of that by Rose and he remarked about how quickly she had adjusted to her new life and that she seemed to be a level headed girl. It was two days before her birthday and Brian was over at Roseâs helping her fix the washing machine. When Laura arrived that day she seemed to be in an especially happy mood as she walked into the kitchen, indeed she was also in a sassy mood. The moment she saw Brian she feigned surprise to her mom and said âWhat is he doing here, is there something going on that I should know about?â
Both Rose and Brian blushed at the insinuation and her mom quickly cut her off âLaura, get your mind out of the gutter. Iâm sorry, Brian?â
Still in a feisty mood Laura continued âI think it is kind of sweet, you could do a lot worse momâ and laughed at the uncomfortable body language that they both displayed.
âLaura! Why donât you find yourself something to do and quick being a bratâ
âOkay, okay, you two want some private time, I get itâ
A happy teenager sashayed away with the biggest grin on her face and a totally embarrassed mom apologized profusely to her neighbor. Despite feeling uncomfortable, Brian just shook it off âItâs okay, Rose, donât worry about itâ
When the chore was finished the two of them relaxed and shared a drink before he was to head home. Before he could do that though, they were once more treated to the sassy girl walking into the kitchen. The mischievous look on her face could tell a story all on its own, she surveyed her victims and with a glint in her eye and a big smile on her face she dropped her biggest quip yet, with the double entendre as apparent as the bow in her hair âThat was quickâ
This time her mom was genuinely furious âLaura Kelly, cut it out right this minute, Iâm seriousâ
The smirk on her face made it clear that she paid no mind. Turning her attention to Brian she put a hand on her jean clad hip and addressed him âSo, Brian, what are you going to give ME for my birthday?â
This time her mom shouted âLaura, STOP!â
Brian sighed as he eyed the petulant girl, and before he could think what he was saying it just came out âThe way you are acting I will give you a good spanking for your birthdayâ
Lauraâs mouth opened wide and while she still had a smile on her face she retorted âThe hell you willâ and then felt her face flush as she looked at her mom in disbelief.
A still angry Rose was emotionless âDonât look at me, I wonât stop himâ
Now blushing furiously, all Laura could say was âMOM!â and then she turned and walked away, with perhaps a tinge of excitement tingling through her body. As the adults watched her leave a now laughing Brian stared at her jean clad bottom, adding âI will see those buns on Friday thenâ and both adults laughed aloud. Laura turned with her mouth open and made eye contact with her neighbor, but said nothing as she left.
Once the teenager was out of the room a laughing Brian turned to Rose âSorry about that Rose, just figured I would give her some of her own medicineâ
Rose looked indignant âPfft, you donât need to apologize, Just go ahead and do it, I think we both know that the best place for that medicine to be served would be to her bottomâ
The rest of the afternoon they were left in peace, Laura never left her room just as if the adults didnât exist. At least in principal anyway, they did exist, and she was in her room all alone trying to decide whether it was an idle threat or whether he was actually thinking about doing it. For some reason the sassiness of Roseâs daughter made their afternoon a special one and having put the girl in her place, Rose and Brian laughed together for an hour.
When it was time to leave the adults were still laughing and now it was Brianâs turn to tease the girl. He looked at Rose and winked and said âWatch thisâ
At the foot of the stairs he looked up and shouted âSo I will see you on Friday, Laura, and donât you dare be late young ladyâ and the two adults almost fell on the floor laughing. Laura lay on her bed and looked at the door where the voice had come from, a flash of fear and a flash of excitement running through her body. She wasnât to know it at that point, but for the next 48 hours it was going to be the only thing on her mind.
It was the morning of Lauraâs birthday and Brian received a call from Rose that very morning. After a quick greeting Rose got right to the point âBrian, about the other nightâ
He quickly interceded her âDonât worry, Rose, I was just teasing the little tykeâ
Taken aback, Rose replied âAre you kidding me, these last two days have been the quietest I have ever known that girl. If you donât follow through with your threat she will walk all over you from now to eternityâ
Brian was lost for words âUh, well, I guessâ
âLook Brian, Iâm just calling you for one reason, that girl is missing a manâs love in her life, she will feel a world better about herself if you doâ
Brian now perked up âWell if you are sureâ
âOh Iâm sure, just do me one favor thoughâ
âWhatâs that?â
âJust donât pull her panties down, that might traumatize her too muchâ
Quite frankly he hadnât even considered that as an option, but he responded âOf course I wouldnât, Roseâ
âThanks Brian, you are such a nice guyâ and Rose hung up the phone.
An hour later a pensive looking girl was stood at the kitchen sink peering over at the neighbors house while sipping a glass of water. Her mom walked in with a content smile on her face as she looked at her darling girl, dressed beautifully in a light blue cotton summer dress. She approached her daughter and put her arm around her. Kissing the girl on the forehead she said âYou had better get it over with honey, he is waiting for youâ and she patted her daughters bottom.
Laura looked up at her mom and said âHe isnât really going to spank me, is he?â
The smile grew wider and the mom kissed her on the forehead again âYes sweetheart, Brian is going to give you a birthday spankingâ. Avoiding any further delay Roseâs voice grew louder âRight girl, you had better get a move on before I decide to spank you myselfâ and she landed a firm swat on the girls rear.
The walk into the house almost made Laura faint, her stomach was in knots with excitement, Brian was so welcoming and her joy grew, at least until she entered the living room and saw a straight backed chair sitting in the middle of it. Brian took her hand and led her to the chair, smiling at her all the way. He couldnât help but be amazed at how this 18 year old girl stood next to him so quietly, she was normally full of life and hopping around everywhere. As he sat down he squeezed her hand âDonât worry, Laura, itâs only a birthday spankingâ
Those words put the slightest glimmer of a smile on her blushing face as Brian sat down, then he gently guided her over his knee. What a site to behold, the poor girl couldnât get her feet to touch the floor and her plump bottom sat up invitingly, a gasp of air came from her mouth when he put his arm around her waist and patted her bouncing bottom. âOne birthday spanking coming upâ he said with joy and before she could react her dress was flipped up in the back.
This snapped her out of her daze and the sprightly girl he knew sprang to life, the hand of hers that flew back was caught immediately as she began her protests âWhat the hell, no frigging way dude, that wasnât part of the bargainâ
Brian sat there with his mouth open, he couldnât believe this was happening, the cute girl next door was over his knee and her bottom was practically bare, save for a pair of pink nylon panties that clung deliciously to the flashy contours of her bottom. Despite her protests, Laura made no effort to get up, in fact she resigned herself to her fate and simply asked if he would release her arm. When he did so she grasped the bottom rung of the chair and awaited the first smack. With one arm across her back and the other across her thighs, Brian stared at the inviting target âSo how old are we today, Laura?â
With a sly grin her feistiness had returned âWell I donât know how old you are, but Iâm eighteenâ
Brian had expected no less and quickly delivered 6 sharp smacks to her upturned bottom âWe will have less of your cheek as well young lady, otherwise we could be here all dayâ
Laura bit her bottom lip as the sting in her bottom stayed there, even though it hurt it wasnât like it killed her, and she did of course have a lot of spirit. Turning her head she replied âAre you done?â
Brian just shook his head âActually, no, Iâm not doneâ and then set about her bottom once more, this time with 12 spanks that had the girl yelping. Laura bucked and writhed and at the end of the 12 spanks she blew her hair up from her forehead. Not a single birthday spank had landed yet as Brian watched Laura sway her bottom from side to side trying to will the sting out, and judging by the now pink cheeks it probably did sting quite a bit. âIf you keep sassing me I will keep on spanking you, so you should think long and hard before you open your mouth to answer meâ
The smiled remained on Lauraâs face, in her mind wasnât the fact that her bottom was getting spanked, it was her fighting spirit and her battle of wills. Just a few minutes before she was shocked and horrified when he pulled her dress up, now she could not care less, no way was she going to satisfy him and just take it without retort. Okay, she thought, he probably will get through to her eventually, but she wasnât anywhere near that point yet and she wasnât going to make it easy for him.
Brian was about to deliver the birthday spanks âShall we get started or do you have anything more sassy to sayâ
âWell apparently you have already startedâ
That wasnât enough to evoke a response, just a retort âIf you wasnât so sassy it would be over by nowâ
Laura quickly mimicked him âIf you wasnât so sassy itâŚâŚ yeoowâ
Before she could finish the spanks once again begun to land on the laughing girls bottom, one side to the other for 30 whole seconds. When this round of spanks were over she felt content, at least for now. Ideas ran through her mind as to how she would get him back, and get him back she will. She pushed herself up using the chair rung and looked over her shoulder at her poor bottom, even allowing herself a slight smirk as she caught site of her glowing bottom, clearly visible since her panties had ridden up so much. âOkay, fineâ she said âYouâve had your fun, can we get the birthday spanks out of the way now?â
Flopping back down she grinned from ear to ear as he agreed with her, but she had just the tiniest bit of sass left in her âCould you at least fix my panties, youâre spanking my bare bottom at the momentâ
Dutifully he complied and an exhilarating feeling swept through her body as she felt his fingers rub along her bottom when he straightened them. âBrace yourself then Lauraâ he said and began her birthday spanks. Laura bit her bottom lip and kicked and flailed her arms and legs as the seat of her panties became thoroughly warmed, and before you knew it the birthday spanking was over.
Both parties were content, Brian sat there with a smug look on his face and the young teen girl furiously trying to rub the sting out of her thinly clad bottom as she stood in front of him. Winking at her he said âYouâre mom will be so proud of meâ
Scrunching her nose up and almost hissing, Laura replied âShe is such a traitor. Donât forget it is her birthday next monthâ and they both laughed. Ten minutes later a young girl was almost skipping down the front path to go home, not in the least bit angry, in fact quite content. Later that night she was stood in her bedroom overlooking Brianâs house with nothing but revenge in her mind. She had just the plan for him, and while it would probably get her spanked again, the spanking wasnât so bad and it would be so worth it. She walked over to the mirror and held her skirt up to look at the bottom, it was only slightly pink right now, but her face grew into the biggest smile that had crossed it in years.
Rose was on the phone to Brian thanking him profusely for what he had done and she knew her daughter was just as delighted. They chatted for ten minutes and just as Rose was about to hang up Brian offered one final line âOh, and before you go Rose, Laura said it was your birthday next monthâ
Complete silence hit both rooms until he finished the conversation laughing âDonât worry dear, you can keep your panties on as wellâ
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